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My first draft script of this page included some heavy exposition, and I went through several rewrites to boil it down to it’s core narrative, seen here. Writing is hard. The thing I’ve learned over the years: When you get stuck, take a step back and revisit the work a day or two later, if time permits. Whenever I do that, I can usually find solutions to problems I didn’t know existed the first time around. 

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