Could I have made more changes to this page? Sure, but all along I’ve held firm to the rule of only redrawing things that I can quickly and efficiently improve upon. Otherwise, it’s a rabbit hole of endless upgrades. However, I’m seeing the need to rework faces in some panels, because there wasn’t a lot of consistency. This was my first graphic novel, after all, and I was in way over my head. Here’s a before and after view of the most recently re-inked page.
Scott