Page 2 ended up as an unintentional blend of literal and non-literal imagery. I introduced what might look like a magical component to the narrative, with Ellyur journaling, while the reader gets a view of her thought process. One can interpret this as representational only, or perhaps the pen is of a futuristic technology that conjures imagery to coincide with her writing. In either choice, I’m employing basic graphic design philosophy, using imagery to lead the eye toward important messaging. I hope you like it, because I plan to bring more ‘out of the box’ concepts like this to the book.
SR