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I originally had written dialogue/exposition for this page, but when the art was finished and it came time to letter it, I went a different route here. Sometimes less is more, and very often I make significant changes to dialogue once the art is complete. This is my way of distancing myself from the script and assuming the role of editor. A character’s facial expression, camera angle or some new, unexpected layout decision will make me re-evaluate their dialogue. As for this page, believe me it’s the calm before the storm. 

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